My best and worst Author.

     • My best author has a good skills in writing ,and the style of his writing is easy to understand. Also, the author makes you want to contenue reading the story. In addition, the author has made a
good topic sentence , a clear body paragraphs , and nice end in the conclusion.

•    My worst author does not have the skills to writing a story. The author does not grab my attention to the story. Also, my worst story does not have a good grammatical structure. In addition, there is some sentence that does not have logical sense.  (1)"In an African old man's house I found a half-naked sculpture, the old man told me this sculpture recorded one of the oldest human civilization, at that time, human beings are the half..". The author does not make connection among himself and the reader.

 

 

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