My Book is "The MOLECULES WITHIN US our body in Health and Disease".

Step1:
        _  I selected this book because I want to understand how our bodies work and how energy dose  its work in our bodies. Also, how to avoid  diseases and how it comes .
 
          _ The author who wrote this book is Dr.Charles A.Pasternak.

          _  The title of the book is "The MOLECULES WITHIN US our body in Health and Disease".

        _ This book was printed in the United States of America.

        _ This book was printed in New York, 1998.

 Step2:

     

          When I was trying to find a book that interest me. There was tow topics that comes in to my mind. The first topic was our body in health and disease and the second topic was Tattoos and our bodies. When I was walking in the library I prefer to take “The MOLECULES WITHIN US our body in Health and Disease". I selected this book because I would like to understand how our bodies are work and knowing how energy does its work in our bodies. In addition, I would like to know how to avoid diseases and how it comes to our bodies. The author who wrote this book is Dr.Charles A.Pasternak. This book was printed in the United State of America, New York, 1998.

 

_ I would like to mention this quote:

“all disease has one of two causes: the genes or the environment (Table2). In general, the more sever the consequences of missing or faulty gene are, the rarer is the incidence. This is because those afflicted with a severely debilitating disease tend not to raise a family and therefore do not pass the gene on the next generation. This is particularly true of the diseases that lead to death before maturity. Such “bad" genes are maintained in the population only because they are passed on by carriers”

 

Works cited*

 Dr.Charles A.Pasternak, The MOLECULES WITHIN US our body in Health and Disease, New Yourk 1998, Page 97

 

 

 

My First Editing

From Words to Sentences to Story

Anne And The New Skirt

     on Thursday in a wonderful summer break,  Anna is trying to attend her friend's birthday on Saturday. She is looking for a new skirt that she will wear it in her friend's birthday.

     In the afternoon Anne is going to mall of Amarica for shopping and trying to find a new skirt. she has money in her pocket to buy a new skirt. she goes to many stores and, she can not find a skirt that she likes. At the end of her shopping she see a skirt in the display store window that she likes. In the same time a customer is looking at the skirt. she enters the store quickly. Also, she find her favorite color in skirt which is neon. she take the skirt and see the price. she pick it up and and walks to the cashier and waiting in line. she is infront of the cashier . Anna is trying to find the money that's in her pocket. But, A hole is burning in her pockets. so, she does not have a money.  she tries to pay by check ,but the cashier closes the register as she hopes to pay. Bummer, she is unhappy and She decides against it. She leaves the boutique. Also, she tries not to think about the skirt any more. Restlessness when she stills thinking about the skirt for all the day. Finally she decides to bye the skirt from the same store.

    The next day she returns to same store and she finds the skirt that she likes and she buys the skirt.this feels so good. Elation. She takes it home. She tries it on again. she tries some clothes that will fits with her skirt. However, It fits none of her other clothes. Now Anne trying to find clothes that will fits with her skirts.

Group work : Tareq Alsomahi,  Sultan Alnawmasi, Abdulmohsen Alkahtani

 

The process of our presentation

      Our topic was English is not my native language. Our native language is Arabic. We had difficult time when we began learn our second language that is English. In that time we got trouble to learn because many thing which are; we did not know the differences between subject and verb agreement, sound the same, pronouns some words, and using verb tens. Learning a new language is not difficult. However, there are some rules in each language that's not the same as our language. What we really want to focus on is a grammar which is not as same as our language. Also, Pronunciation has many different sounds in English and how to use pronouns in writing and count and noncount nouns. We have discussed that in our group last Tuesday and we come up with many problems that we want to share it with the class.

       First, we chose to do our presentation in PowerPoint. Then we were trying to see who will present the introduction. The student who says the introduction was Sultan. After that we were trying to find sources for the information which is about Subject and verb agreement, and sound the same. All the information that we found was in LEO that make it easy for us to find information. We find some information about Subject and verb agreement which is that subject and verb must agree in number: both must be singular, or both must be plural and we find some examples. In addition we found much information In LEO that talks about sound the same. We found that “A paper containing sentences of one short pattern bores both the writer and the reader for two reasons:

1. Repetition of a single, simple sentence pattern draws attention to itself, not to the ideas in the paper.
2. Simple, short sentences cannot show the reader the many relationships that exist among ideas of different importance”

Then we have our conclusion.

       We were the first group who did the presentation. We were sharing the presentation each one have to say something. Our members group were Sultan alnawmasi, Tareq Alsomahi, and Abdulmohsen Alkahtani.

      The main goal for this presentation that we did in class is to show students who their native language is not English. There is different between each language grammar and sound.  I hope that we have given enough information about our topic to the audience.  We would like to thank you for your attention.

My native language is not English

The presentation
Our native language is not English‭. ‬Our native language is Arabic‭. ‬We had difficult time when we began learn our second language that is English‭. ‬In that time we got trouble to learn because many thing which are‭; ‬I did not know the differences between subject and verb agreement‭, ‬sound the same‭, ‬pronouns some words‭, ‬and using verb tens‭.‬

Subject and verb agreement:
"The subject and verb must agree in number: both must be singular, or both must be plural. Problems occur in the present tense because one must add an -s or -es at the end of the verb when the subjects or the entity performing the action is a singular third person: he, she, it, or words for which these pronouns could substitute.

Notice the difference between singular and plural forms in the following examples:"(1)

examples:

Singular	Plural
The student sings. (He or she sings)	Your children sing. (They sing)
The bird does migrate. (It does)	Those birds do migrate. (They do)

Sound the same: "If you read through a paper you've written and notice that you've written sentences in a single, short pattern, ask yourself the following questions. Your answers can help you revise the sentences to express your ideas more clearly and to add variety to your paper".(2)

• Do adjacent sentences contain the same subject and/or the same verb?If so, you can combine two or more short, simple sentences in a single, concise sentence.
  
  
  
  • Join the sentences by omitting a repeated subject.
    

    Original	Radio advertisements are broadcast daily or weekly. Radio advertisements reach a wide audience.
    Revision	Radio advertisements are broadcast daily or weekly and reach a wide audience.

  • Join the sentences by omitting repeated subjects and verbs and by using adjectives.

    Original	The city council conducted a study of public transportation. The study was lengthy. The study was detailed.
    Revision	The city council conducted a lengthy, detailed study of public transportation.

  • Join the sentences by omitting repeated subjects and verbs and by using adverbs.
    

    Original	The negotiators worked to gain approval for the contract. The negotiators worked at a steady pace. However, they worked slowly.
    Revision	The negotiators worked steadily but slowly to gain approval for the contract.

In conclusion:  Learning a new language is not difficult. However,there are some rules in each language that's not the same as your language. We should now the grammar of English to be better in this language . Reference: 1-http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/grammar/subverag.html 2-http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/style/sentencev.html 3-
Topic 1: English is not my native language
Members:
Sultan alnawmasi, Tareq Alsomahi, and Abdulmohsen Alkahtani

LEO Topic

  My topic is going to be about My native language is not English. Learning a new language is not difficult. However,there are some rules in each language that's not the same as your language. what I really want to focus on is a grammar which is not as same as my language. Also, Pronunciation has many different sounds in English and how to use pronouns in writing and count and noncount nouns.

In Addition,

• I want help in when to use an article- -a,an,the,or - what article to use.
• I'm concerned about sentence structure and need to know more about where to place phrases in sentences

• I confuse certain words in English:   much and many
•                                                            no or not
•                                                            who or whom
   

My best and worst Author.

     • My best author has a good skills in writing ,and the style of his writing is easy to understand. Also, the author makes you want to contenue reading the story. In addition, the author has made a
good topic sentence , a clear body paragraphs , and nice end in the conclusion.

•    My worst author does not have the skills to writing a story. The author does not grab my attention to the story. Also, my worst story does not have a good grammatical structure. In addition, there is some sentence that does not have logical sense.  (1)"In an African old man's house I found a half-naked sculpture, the old man told me this sculpture recorded one of the oldest human civilization, at that time, human beings are the half..". The author does not make connection among himself and the reader.

 

 

  (1)  http://yifuchen.blogspot.com/